The late William Shakespeare once wrote, “A rose by any other name
would smell just as sweet”
He wrote this and suddenly I found myself
staring down a barrel, the trigger
the way I form the shape of you around my lips
I let go of the safety and so you bloomed into my chest,
a seedling of everything we are to each other
burrowed beneath the suffocating weight of all we will
never be
That is to say, when the next body to grace my bedsheets
has also been christened a rose,
I will convince myself it is not her
sound-like-you petals and soft-like-you thorns
that have lead her to plaster closed the chasm
you left in my throat.
That is to say,
I will never not try to find you
in the crest of my lover’s hip. Or her cheek.
Or the way her mother calls her by your name,
because it will always only ever be
your name
And I know I will never hold another hand
like I held yours
as we pulled each other, wrist to wrist,
heartbeat to heartbeat, chasing our breath and a moment of clarity
all at once,
my words two steps ahead of my feet
as I woke you from the bliss that is not knowing a thing
you now cannot imagine
having never known
and it was all I could do not to fall asleep beside you and pretend
I had been dreaming this whole time
When I told you I loved you, I lost you.
That is to say, I have not seen another rose since
I have not pricked my finger on another thorn since,
Have not heard that song and not thought of you since
My garden-stained hands are tainted with the thought of you but I never
meant for them to dirty you as well
This burden now for both of our shoulders,
I am guilty of loving a thing purer than I.
I try to recall a moment afterwards in which you made it clear
you did not want me gone but I struggle
Find myself backspacing as the untruth of what I am trying to remember becomes apparent
I’ve known for a while now that you will never see me bathed in light
the way the sun dances over your timid petals
But to realize I am only a shadow, a backlight to his radiance,
is a storm I was not prepared to brave
So even still, in these not-belonging-to-you moments, I manage to find myself
rewinding into who we were before we knew each other like we do now
And I wonder, had I kept my tongue quiet and left us at a crossroads,
would we have been as stunted as we are now
here in the echo of all I said?

This is so beautiful and so nicely written; it felt like a poem I would read in a poetry book.
“I will never not try to find you /in the crest of my lover’s hip. Or her cheek.” Those lines are so good and the whole poem is relatable to anyone who’s had their heart broken before. You kept the analogy of the rose going very well throughout the whole poem. I really really enjoyed reading this.
-Maddy Mengel
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What an incredible poem. I really felt like I was reading a story. Like the person writing had just experienced all the things written about. You did a great job of keeping the reader hanging on every word, and the emotion was present and really undeniable. You did a great job.
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